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Astra Black, page 02 by agnidevi Astra Black, page 02 by agnidevi
The last page of introduction before jumping into real action.

You start with excitement and then routine & frustration quickly consume you.

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jwiest Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Not sure if you're looking for spelling/grammar type suggestions, especially 2 yrs after the fact, but that last line should probably be "The Eye had already become a myth when Lord Altair found a strange orb on an uncharted planet..."
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agnidevi Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2017   Digital Artist
Still appreciate that you guys paying attention!
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MajinSenpai Featured By Owner May 31, 2015
this pic...with no text and on a wallpaper rez would be AWESOME !!
Smtg like this ...maybe.....
s19.postimg.org/e0ar6nqxv/astr…
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:iconagnidevi:
agnidevi Featured By Owner May 31, 2015   Digital Artist
Okay I'll think about it. :)
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NewPlanComics Featured By Owner May 30, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Love this shot! Do you have a version without the words?
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:iconagnidevi:
agnidevi Featured By Owner May 31, 2015   Digital Artist
Sure the text is always stay atop of a drawing.
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NewPlanComics Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
You should post it. This is poster material.
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GreyAreaRK1 Featured By Owner May 9, 2015
Wonderfully done.  (Tiny typo:  on *an* uncharted planet)
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:iconagnidevi:
agnidevi Featured By Owner May 12, 2015   Digital Artist
Thank you!
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Merc-King Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015
And once again humanity ruined humanity. Good jorb humanity!
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TFSakon Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2015
Great use of superposition onto the scene it links in so well, congruent with the progression described in the text.
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:iconagnidevi:
agnidevi Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2015   Digital Artist
Yeah that was the idea though I'm not sure if it worked well here...
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funkyalienlovers Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
superb work amazingly done
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Selene87 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2015
It seems very interesting Llama Emoji-48 (I'm Cool with Mah Sunglasses) [V2] 
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Gunmetalblack Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015
Fantastic work, man!
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lvlapple Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Interesting story. Now I'm curious :o
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509freak Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Sounds like an interesting story. I'd like to read more.
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RolandBoyce Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Very cool!
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Silvador Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015
Three things instantly jumped to mind while reading those last two parts...
1. DUNE!
2. Assassin's Creed
3. LOC-NAR

lol XD
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:iconagnidevi:
agnidevi Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015   Digital Artist
LOC-NAR? What is it?
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Silvador Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015
Green orb of evil that spread chaos where ever it goes. Featured in the Heavy Metal movie.
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:iconagnidevi:
agnidevi Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2015   Digital Artist
Ah I've seen it.

Well anyway it's a B-movie novel so don't expect AAA stuff. ;)
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DarkerEve Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015
Looking incredible, can't wait now for the action XD
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lovlyoreo Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015  Student Artisan Crafter
WOW!!! Amazing story
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SmyliArt Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
This is getting interesting! Is it all going to be on dA or on any other page?
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:iconagnidevi:
agnidevi Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015   Digital Artist
Thanks! For now it's DA exclusive. :)

Let's see what happens... but by looking at other creators/projects I don't have much expectations.
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SmyliArt Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Okay. Well, we'll see what will happen. I am looking forward to it!
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NetSeawolf Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
wow great another one !!
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SnowyBrush Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Great beginning! For the great story, I hope.
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